"Life" In our world we dont know the life is changing as the days pass by.Every minute a person die,a human suffer ,and life change. .Did you forget God? Who created us. Who created the world ,and who gives life every Being in our world.While your still alive ,Do you think you deserve to go in heaven? Did you already accept God as your Lord and personal saviour? Think About it.We dont know when, the world's end. Thats God's decision.And we also dont know that when your life's end .maybe tomorrow? or maybe tonight or maybe now.We all know God created us to worship Him, because we borrowed our life to God. And we should repay Him. And what we did? making bad things, tsk..tsk..tsk.. you should change your life. While your still alive in this world. Make thigs that has a sense dont waste every seconds,minutes,hours in your life.Try to enjoy your self while your still alive.And Worship God/ go to church/ Praying/Confess your sins / reading bible /do thigs good to other people/ /Following the Ten commanments. Do good things that makes you and God Happy.This is a way that you accept God as your Lord and personal saviour. "And You Should be ready all the time". because we dont know when Jesus Comes Back.
Is this for school or just for fun? When it comes to religious texts or essays, I prefer to read those that are a bit longer. It would be nice if you could elaborate your thougts and make this twice as long? =)
So this was an essay for your english subject? If you have the english version of microsoft word, they can spell check and grammar correct for you. That might help. As for the actual content, I find it a little contradictory that you're talking about worshipping God, going to church, changing our lives, and yet in another section you started a thread on naked pictures of somebody? Sorry, but could you explain what you mean by "borrowed our life to God" because I don't understand that bit. But I do understand the rest of what you're saying.