I need some suggestions and tips for my comic that I'm going to enter to the NT. It currently looks like this; http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d13/V ... ittles.jpg Although that's only a rough draft. I think I need a third 'box' but I don't know what it should contain :? And I haven't made the background for the second box yet. Also, I'd like some suggestions on how to make the text funnier, it's supposed to only be two comments but since my native tongue isn't English, those two are directly translated so I'm not quite sure how they are interpreted by those who speak English as their first language Thanks in advance =) edit; I now see that the image are pretty pixelish, the real one isn't as bad. That screenie was only saved in paint, but as you can see I'm working in Illustrator for the vector graphic. So don't mind that it looks a bit weird, focus on the concept instead =)
haha I'll be honest, this one is priceless...the concept is just awesome! Well about the text, english is not my mother language either but it's easy to interpret what you wanted to say. About a third box, I don't think it would be necessary, but that's just my opinion. Good luck!
It still looks cool! You've asked me for advice before and to be honest I don't know more now than I did then. Good luck anyway. ^^
You don't think it's detailed enough? I've made as much as every single colour spot on that blumaroo by hand! Just kidding, this is only the first draft. Thanks for the input ^^ Although I don't want to make it too detailed since it'll be pretty small if it goes into the NT. I'm currently working on the lines of marching clockwork grundos that will be in front of the tank in the second box Not sure what I'll make the background as though, thinking of maybe doing that palace-thingie in Snow Valley with a big hole in it. =) Again, suggestions are heavily appreciated.
looks like you have something amazing in the making, if you'd like, you can pm me, an both you and I can work on interpreting it for others