STORY POEM ABOUT AUTOBUYING..created by me

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  1. pandahorde

    pandahorde Level IV

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    "AUTOBUYING"

    Another day sets me up,
    The Shadow of Grundo wakes me up.
    And approach the sun smiling
    Just to warned me about autobuying.

    I got tons of rare item in my bag,
    I dont know if that makes me sad.
    Its better to sell in shop
    that makes my heart keeps hop.

    Everytime Tnt search for me
    They dont know im flying like a bee.
    Im afraid to get ice
    Thats why im hiding like mice.

    As i run as fast as i can,
    They followed me as i run....
    The Tnt fired that "Bzzt Blaster" gun
    I cant say that was fun!

    The word i flash in my mine was "frozen"
    all rare items i lost was dozen.
    Tnt leave me in the haunted woods crying,
    Thats the time i realize autobuying.

    The day was so cold to live.
    I have lots of memories to forgive.
    A Xweetok approach and sleep with me.
    Again i think that my life will be set free.

    The next day i restock legitly,
    With my face you can see me hapily.
    Never Quit,Never Turn Back,Face your Problem.
    As the days comes by you dont know what
    will happen,



    I created this poem. i dunno if this cool or not.
    The message of this poem is never quit ,reach your Goal
     
  2. Rexx

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    Simply Inspirational.

    :p.

    Thanks for sharing :).
     
  3. unknown2

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    even legit isn't safe ;)
     
  4. Glamorous

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    So did you plagiarize this one too or what
     
  5. pandahorde

    pandahorde Level IV

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    nope.... i created this one.. im using neopets words like bzzt blaster..
    the xweetok ..grundo ..etc
     
  6. x0angelus0x

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    Wow.....you're really good at this. :shock:
     
  7. KeK

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    I enjoyed reading it :) Maybe try some more? :)
     
  8. deathcraze

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    lol, this made me laugh :D

    i tried my hand at writing poems once.. but simply couldnt manage to make it rhyme :shock:
     
  9. onprogus

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    Hehe thats cool, you should write some more:p
     
  10. pandahorde

    pandahorde Level IV

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    maybe if i had time i will make more..
    i rhyme it so the poem would be better.
     
  11. babyx_fob

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    Kewl poem it rhymes a lot. [=
     
  12. ali913xx

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    xD wow, that was deep, I will never look at ABing the same again.
     
  13. x0angelus0x

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    I'm curious....Where do you get your inspiration from. If someone wants me to write a poem, all I can think of is zombies, mutation, guns, grenades and a camera........
     
  14. pandahorde

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    hhmm... part of my brain works on making poem. it gives me thinking immediately .. lol your pretty scary when making poems.. zombies.lol
     
  15. Konvict

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    First of all panda nice poem but i have my doubts as you cant say how to write a poem ;).

    All you have to do to write a poem is think of something that means alot to you in life or of someone who ment alot then work with there name and just add and delete bits of the poem till you have what you are looking for.
    I should know all this as i am a published poet in ACTUAL books ;)

    EDIT: I have just re read the poem and the last 3 verses semm very
    familiar to ones i have read in books over years only with slight alterations of the words i will find it as i have the book with it somewhere and i will post the poem in question :?

    This is the part i have heard b4 and i am almost certain it is part of a wilfred owen poem.
     
  16. antikitra

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    It probaly is stolen :/ After all, not many people can trust panda anymore. He's been banned and then unbanned and then suspended.
     
  17. noxxten

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    nice poem, you sure can rhyme xDD
     
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